Alana,

No, I love the storytelling, but you first started with explaining ghosting and the need for closure (first few 4–5 paragraphs) which you could have shortened by weaving into your story, but it’s just my opinion.

11 min. read of closure tips felt long is all. I struggle with same thing, and am just wondering what the sweet spot for a story and tips is!

In friendship,

T

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